A great piece of editing. You have used very good continuity - your piece flows naturally. Your choice of music and sounds add tension and atmosphere to the film.
The end is a little bit rushed. You have tried to use fast cuts but it is a bit difficult to follow what is happening. Think about an audience who don't know what it is happening. Would they understand what is happening?
A great piece of editing. You have used very good continuity - your piece flows naturally. Your choice of music and sounds add tension and atmosphere to the film.
ReplyDeleteThe end is a little bit rushed. You have tried to use fast cuts but it is a bit difficult to follow what is happening. Think about an audience who don't know what it is happening. Would they understand what is happening?
Merit
Mr Monahan
Mr Monohan,
ReplyDeleteI agree that the ending was a bit rushed but the previous one I did I couldnt find so I had to quickly make another one.
Xhesi