Evaluation

Evaluation

My presentation was about a Mockumentary my group are making called “The Only Way Is Bermondsey.” I took the role of scribe in our group. The section I planned and prepared for was the treatment and the recce. This meant I had to present our ideas, to the class, about what our Mockumentary was about and where we were going to be filming it. When I presented my bit to the class, I used a range of skills such as eye contact, hand gestures, and clear language. During the presentation I felt a bit nervous, however, I was fully prepared and therefore knew what I was doing.  People said I was good at speaking clearly, using eye contact and having confidence. I was most proud of my clear and projected voice as it made sure people knew what I was talking about. I was also pleased with my eye contact as I am not very good at it but I colour coded my script so then I knew when I had to look up and I would know where to start again. To improve in the future I would look up more often and for longer. I didn’t use body language very effectively and I think this was because I was holding my script and therefore it was restricting me from moving very well. Therefore, in the future I will try to remember it so I can use body language and more hand gestures. People said that to improve I should use tone of voice and include body language to interact with the audience more. Therefore, in the future, I will memorise my script which means that I could use hand gestures more effectively and body language.

Xhesi Abdurahmani (HAB)

Well done! You are a merit because you have said what skills you used and how you could improve, and what you did to persuade your audience to watch your Mockumentary.

To improve for a distinction you can explain what role you took in your Mockumentary and how you delivered your presentation. (Y)