Wednesday 17 October 2012

act 1 1st draft


Act 1 Scene 1:

INT. BOBBIS HOUSE. MORNING.

BOBBI, a 15 year old girl which blonde straight, orange make up and mascara sticking her eyelashes together. She wakes up to the sound BOBBI wakes up to the sound of her alarm clock. This is her first day of school. BOBBI is getting dressed for school. She hears a knock on the door. The door swings open and BOBBIs foster dad burst through.

BILL (Foster dad):

You still not up yet? Get up quick and ermmmm keep your              pie hole shut! (He shouts aggressively)

BOBBI:

Yes, sorry.

 

BILL slams the door vigorously

BOBBI slowly gets dressed slowly. BOBBI goes over to the mirror and start to redo her make-up, applying it on heavily. She swings her Pauls Boutique bag over her shoulder and head out the door.

 

 

ACT 1 SCENE 2:

INT. SCIENCE DEPARTMENT. DAY

MR COOPER, the head of year, calls a head girl AMIE with blonde curly hair flowing over her shoulders. AMIEs face, like BOBBIs was also heavily made up with orange foundation and thick mascara. AMIE walks over confidently to BOBBI and smiles at her.

                            MR COOPER:

Good Morning BOBBI and welcome to Bermondsey Academy. This is our head girl Amie and she will be in all your classes. First of all she will show you around the school and tell you what we expect from you while you are here. I must dash but im more than sure that AMIE will make you feel comfortable.

MR COOPER walks away rigidly whil AMIE and BOBBI are left alone

AMIE:

Hey, how you liking the school so far?

BOBBI:

Its alright (she says shyly)

AMIE:

Well im sure you can hang out with me. Im not really bovvered to show you round much but ill show you the toilets and our lessons and the lunch hall okay?

BOBBI:

Ermmmm okay….(she replies comfortably)

AMIE:

Well come on then….

ACT 1 SCENE 3:

AMIE and BOBBI open the doors leading to the lunch hall and walk in. AMIE and BOBBI get a separate table just for them self’s and sit down. BOBBI starts eating the sandwich she made in the morning, tuna dripping from the sides. All of a sudden she puts down her sandwich and starts rubbing her belly. Unaware of what she doing.

AMIE:

Are you alright?

BOBBI realeases what she was doing and stops immediatetly.

BOBBI:

Yeah, im alright

AMIE:

Haha you were starting to worry me there, I thought you were pregnant or something, lol! (She starts to laugh to herself)

BOBBI remains silent

AMIE:

Wait a sec, are you pregnant?

BOBBI nods slowly and looks down at her food. She picks up her sandwich and starts to nibble on it.

AMIE:

Oh… well I promise that I wont tell a soul!

BOBBI:

Thanks (she whispers quietly)

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