Treatment draft 1

Act 1:

It’s the first day of school and Bobbi is new to Bermondsey academy. A teacher gets a girl called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how the things work there. Amie and Bobbi bond really well and decide to have lunch together in the school lunch hall when all of the sudden she starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she’s doing, when Amie makes a joke about Bobbis stomach but Bobbi doesn’t laugh and Amie realises that she really is pregnant and she promises to keep this a secret. However a boy that goes to the school over hears this and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi and she going to stir things up.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside in the playground on a bench talking about their summer when all of a sudden  Kelly makes rude comments about her being  fat and this gets Bobbi really mad and angry and Bobbi walks over and raises her arm to slap Kelly but Kelly stops Bobbis hand and pushes her to the ground. Bobbi lays on the ground moaning in pain while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help her up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls Ms Robinson to call an ambulance as blood trickles from under Bobbi’s skirt.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance and is worried for her baby. Bobbi is lying in the hospital bed when Dr Richardson comes in and tells her that she has lost the baby. She starts to sob silently to herself. Amie comes in and hears the news and comforts her by staying by her side. Amie questions Bobbi about the father but Bobbi remains silent as tears are running down her face.