Treatment draft 2

Act 1:

Bobbi wakes up to the sound of her alarm clock. It’s her first day at this new school. She misses her friends at her old school Peckham Academy. She’s dreading it more than anything. What if people notice? What if people find out? What if they judge her? She remembers every detail of that night and will never forget it. It pains her having to cope with it all alone but she is not giving up, she will push through….

Bobbi is new to Bermondsey Academy. Mr Cooper, in the Science department, gets a student called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how the things work there. Bobbi is shy at first but gets to know Amie so they bond really well and decide to have lunch together in the school lunch hall While eating her tuna sandwich, she feels the baby kicking. Bobbi starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she’s doing, Amie makes a joke about Bobbi’s stomach but Bobbi doesn’t laugh.  Amie realises that this is serious and that she really is pregnant and Amie promises to keep this a secret. However Jay overhears this and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi. Kelly is going to start stirring things up. Bobbi’s secret is now revealed to the whole Academy.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside, in the playground, on a bench talking about what they did over the summer holidays. Suddenly, Kelly makes rude comments to Bobbi about her being fat and this gets Bobbi really mad and angry. Bobbi walks over and raises her hand to slap Kelly but Kelly stops Bobbis hand and pushes Bobbi and she stumbles and drops to the ground. Bobbi lays on the ground moaning in pain while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help Bobbi up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls Ms Phalange to call an ambulance as blood trickles from under Bobbi’s skirt.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance and is worried for her baby. She starts to panic but Amie holds her hands comforting her. Dr Bing says some comforting words to her but she starts to worry as more and more blood comes runs down her skirt. Bobbi is lying in the hospital bed when Dr Bing comes in and tells her that she has lost her baby. She starts to sob silently to herself. Amie comes in and hears the news and comforts Bobbi by staying by her side. Amie questions Bobbi about the father but Bobbi remains silent as tears are running down her face. She wonders if she can trust Amie with her big secret and she starts telling Amie her story….